You raise some thought good points about the judgment of others when it is simply your intent to be your own person. Good work.

I thought this poem was okay. It doesn't suck, but there are things that could be improved. First off, some of the lines were short enough that some of the rhymes seemed a bit too easy and fake. e.g. reject/object. By the way, the first two lines of the second stanza should be ended with a question mark :-).