This is an awesome poem. Great work!

This is an awesome poem. Great work!

I LOVE IT! this is amazing! i love the entire poem. the beginning:
Staring at the skies
Lost in their darkness
Believing their lies

is amazing just by itself, you used perfect words. and then by the end and you have gone back and forth, the closing stanza just closes the entire development. its like a story, but with more meaning and symbols. you're sooo talented!

take care!