fantastic poem with a great rythm to it, rely liked the pattern.hun please keep looking for the silver lining and holding on, and keep up the superb writing.

stay strong, lu -x-x-x-x-

Thanku so much hun xxxxx

Excellent poem :-) please dont give up hun ({) together we'll make it through. xxx

Thanku! xx

Wonderful. really really good :) Hay thanks for the comments girl. =D

Take care always,
xx - Kalah

awwww hun. i wish i nu all the answers to help you, its a great write, you know im here for you to talk to if you need it, im always here,
take care always,
please,
luv ya hun,
ellie

Thnku so much every1 :-) xxxx

Thanku hun! xxxx

wow this was awsome!!!!! im adding you to my favorites!

Thanku hun! xxx

Thanku xx