I'm sorry he did that to you. I wish I could say or do something to make the fear go away. But you have to tell someone. Keep up the good work. Very good poem.

Your friend,
Ashley

sad poem
but good
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whoa thats really good for being so young you have a great skill!! never give up!!! and keep it real!!!

much love

Emmerz~*~*~

ur a great writer! i'm sorry dear.. itz hard to keep all this inside.. y don't u tell ur mother i guess shez the person i would tell..

(plz take a look at my poems.. i'd appreciate it.. thx)

**tear** good work!

**tear** good work!

Wow... did that really happen?

just thinking about such a violation makes me feel dirty

im so sorry that he treated you like an easy to-go item,
never that experience make you feel worthless because your not

i liked the poem alot but i didnt htink the lines were flowing all together that well.

keep writing i would like to hear more from you

Powerful poem... full of emotion. Very good!
I can relate to this one. I have a poem called "Forever Changed" about an uncle molesting me for years. It's hard to deal with, but life DOES get better and you move on.
Take care & God bless.