...its so true... oh so true...
good on ya mate, hang in there

You are a really deep thinker aren't you. From all the poems that I have read up here yours is the only one that made me think and I like that. I think the way a person writes says alot about their character not exactly the character who they are but the one they are going to become. And the way you write shows me that you are going to become a beautiful thinker and maybe even a briliant poet. If that is who you chose to become. I love this poem, in matter of fact I more than love this poem. You did a wonderful job on it

like i sed last time i read this, the chain wont end with u hun, so dont evn give it another thought. i really love this tho, like the others sed its so tru and it dus make ya think. it shows me that u r very very talented bubba. luv ya hun lots