i love that you wrote a poem in the form a message to your mother, and how you cry out for help but she doesn;t seem to know, or want to know. It is something that alot of people our age are going through, trying to communicate with our families when something is wrong, but they can't seem to understand. You put that message across perfectly and in a clear and powerful way. good job as usual

I thought this poem was amazing!! Great flow and cool structure!! Well good luck and I hope everything works out for ya!

wow, my parents are totally oblivious too so I can relate, I'm not sure they'd blink if shot's came from my room... anyways, thanks for the comment on my stuff, I love your work, I just rarely get to comment.

emma x

Deep, Amazing and absolutely beautiful. Great way of letting your feelings out. A great job as always. lol