Comments : Racism(Adriano*)Part I

  • 19 years ago

    by Lushed

    good job! it has a very good message, and your words are really powerful. my favorite is this:
    Skin color black. blood red. Silence is gold

    i love how you use color itsself to prove your point! its a wonderful poem!

  • 19 years ago

    by Kia

    awesome poem, racisim is something that boils my blood, i cant stand it great job