i liked the last stanza it rocked totally. ive experienced myself being lonely with thousands of people around me. its crazy huh. you did an awesome job writing about being lonely it fits well and works well. keep rockin the poems
-iyke

This is a very powerful piece of poetry. You convey your feelings so well. This poem flowed naturally! Truly a work of genius~Holly

Amazing poem, i totally understand what you mean! hayley xx