Dude!! i remember that one! i voted for it, remember? long too :-p very good job. i love the vocabulary and style.

Wow.. this one was really good! I loved how you wrote it and the way you just put it all together. A very good job! =) Happy New Years! Take care and God bless!

OMGOSH! i love this!! its sooo good!
this part is sooo amazing:

Many see a mask,
many see a face.
All i see is a phony,
desolate, lecherized vice,
seeping out various life; A leech.

you have a remarkable vocabulary!