A beautiful poem, as always. Hope you had a wonderful Xmas. lol

another great write! awesome job, I especially love the line
"Somewhere behind the shadowed walls
Someone will find me screaming"
it's a superb read, nice work.

emma x.

I love how you portrayed the betrayl and sufferage during the subject with dramatic symbols and metaphors. I especially admired the stance,
"In this scary word of love they praise
I cannot find it's meaning
Somewhere behind the shadowed walls
Someone will find me screaming"
it really creates an effect and gives the reader understanding as to how much pain this relationship caused that it has had a despairing outcome on the victim. Great job