I really liked this. I love the title tied in with the piece. After reading the poem, the title really pulls it all together and creates a different outlook on the writing. i love how you detailed the irony and used metaphors and symbols to portray the subject. I especially admired the lines,
"I'm in every tear you've shed
And I'm in each drop of blood you've bled"
I really like those lines, it reallu shows the importance and pain of the subject and brings understanding to the reader. Well done

yea i agree great job keep it up