This poem is very sad yet touching. I like the way you wrote it, the rhythm of it. I really like the very last sentence: 'For no one is to know of my love for you
Not even you......'
It's so simple yet you understand it all from those words. Great job, keep writing. You're very talented for a 13 year old (even though im just 2 years older than you lol). You have talent.
Gurdy x (GoddessOfWings)

hey i really like this one. uve had a really bad time wit guys havent u?