I'm not religous either, but this is lovely. I really admire the language you chose, it really creates an effect and surrounding that draws the reader to an understanding of the piece. Well done

Simple, effective, and to the point.

I'm sure we all sometimes surprise ourselves *smiles*.

Thank you folks.

Interesting, so short yet so meaningful...loved it

I think god would have forgiven, lol, I'm not religious eaither, but nice work.

emma x

I've never been into religion either.. this little "prayer" is more like the standard poem than any of your other works.. although that's not what makes it better or worse - again, the depth of meaning is excellent, and its shortness was one factor that contributed to that.