Comments : A girl named hope

  • 19 years ago

    by deadnalone

    wow, thats really good, im glad it all worked out for you.
    k i t, even if you don't need my shoulder to lean on,
    or leave me, if u wana persue ur better life,
    hope it stays gd for you,
    ellie,
    someone who you helped, and tried to help you too.

  • 19 years ago

    by jescelle

    awww of course i will stay in touch, i love helping you!

  • 19 years ago

    by Hannah

    wow...awesome poem! It caught my attention when I was looking at the list of your poems..thanks so much for your note! I really appreciate it!

  • 19 years ago

    by Danielle

    i think I saw god in that little girls face,
    she found me when no one else was looking.

    That whole poem was beautiful. But, I more than anything loved that one part of the stanza. It was inspiring. Great job. One of my favorite's so far.