another great poem! this poem reminds me of my dad he would say things as if my life was a game he confressed me alot ! Great job a big 5

I'm experiencing a very similar situation and you put it into perspective so smoothly.

very well done. i liked the poem. i am finding myself compelled to read more rather then write more poems. you seem to write very well poems. Though i may not comment on them all, i do read a lot of them.

I read a lot of the people who are on my favorites list sometimes; i go back and look at their beginning to understand how far they have truely come.

Your a wonderful poet with a gift of words.

Thank you for the read,
Five

i like this poem, although these days i can't realte to it anymore, im afraid i play the gaem now, i wish i was different but i got tired of people doing it to me........nice poem anyways

Lauren