hmm thats a really good poem...to me it sounds like you wrote it from the heart...i think thats the poems that come out of your feelings are the best ones...all my poems are from the heart...you should read some it would help...i'd like to know your opinion
~Christina~

hey great poem i luved it.
im cheaking out ur work
id really appricate it if u cud read a few of my poems
xx hayz xx