nice poem keep writing i really liked it alot

This is another beautiful poem, Karisma (by the way, I love your name)

There are just a couple changes I'd think about...just to mkae it flow better. I will send them to you via private message.

Great work!

Wow...that poem was awesome!!!
Shelb

Great poem...you truely have talent
Shelb

Awesome poem, very deep and nicely written !