Great poem hun. Thanks for the comment on my poem. Take Care :)

-Jessica x

wow, amazing write. really liked the lines

Now you hold me in cold blood
My beating heart is dead
The music has seized
Your rhythmic lie had me deceived

brilliant! keep it up and take care, lu -x-x-x-

Love life for everything that it's worth..

§The Only Rose In This Desert§

I really like this poem, hun. Very good job! Thanks for the comment. Take care always & God bless!

-GJ

What a beautiful poem. Some excellent lines: "You're the flame that flickers over ashed floors". I thoroughly enjoyed this, the overall effect was chilling.

-paperdoll

Thanks for your comments :) You write lovely poetry.

WoW that was a real good poem keep it up!!!!