I really liked this. The descriptive symbols you used really created an intriguing atmosphere and I loved the way you worded the peice. Some of the lines I found just lovely and captivating. Especially the lines,
"Clearly for once, not just a sea of emotions,
Floating forever on this boat, this mass of bones,
Below this, all thats here is liquid crescent depths of darkness."
I love the detailed imagery and beautiful wording you used in that stance. Beautiful, well done