i like the fact that this could be a song... i would like to use it for my band... of course id need your permission... lol if we make it big you could be our lyricist...

sincerely,
blackrose A.K.A. the beauty in death

Thank you for your comment. But unfortunately, I have my own band I'm using this for. Sorry. :(

hey lyss, good poem. yeah we could use it for our band. remember? ..... i see ur bird!!!! lmao