hey,
u must've really loved her. she was stupid to let you go. if i were her, i would've held on to you as long as possible.

-rebecca

"It was all fake, all a love" I think you meant to say "it was all fake, all a lie"
this poem is very intersting. I really liked it, the only thing I wasn't to fond of was how every line rhymed the same way, after a while it got kind of repetative, and then you changed it so a couple times so it kinda of threw me off.. Other than that preaty good job.