that was good.. i liked it!!!
-K

awesome work .. ! ! lol .. !
5/5

awwww. thanks ever one for commenting my poem. well thanx to all except lazelle, oh well if yall liked then then im happy im writing a new poem for yall to read it will be on here in a week or so.
love yall, mckayla
p.s. you are welcome, bella latina

I really liked this poem. But I think that it would have fit even better in the nature poems. :-) Good job! *Jordan-Paige

This is nito and this is very good. :-)!*!*!*!*!*!*!*!*!*!*!*!*!*!*! call me when u see this.