its good but ur summer ones are better, u shud write sum more like dat ;) :P
lol
take care
ellie

That poem was really good and i enjoyed reading it...u have talent so keep it up and never stop writing..and thx for ur comment..much appreciated..
*XoX Sw33ti3*

Good job dude, I can really relate to this piece :) I felt what you were saying... I think I was there a month ago... but yeah, anyway, great stuff, keep it up. Take care :)

sweet and unique>i like it!! *5*