Jessi and Zy hit it right on the nose..A magnificent poem indeed..I also was floored by your last two lines..it diesnt get any better than this..I loved it . Love, Tim

Holly,

This is a beautiful write. It is important to always have a message when one writes-and I appreciate this poem because it offers just that. Keep Writing...Five.

Libby

Love the imagination. This is awesome! Great poem there.

Holly this was so relatable as I was close to suicide over someone, you captured everthing i felt.
Dave

i like this a lot, its not a sad poem really, the end is optimistic and positive

Lovely poem! Nice rhymes and concept! 5/5