Comments : I dedicate my life to you

  • 19 years ago

    by Idiosyncratic

    well poems arent supposed to describe every little detail, are they?

  • 19 years ago

    by Idiosyncratic

    i mean they can, but some are better with some mystery. plus i couldnt write that part in without changing the meaning

  • 19 years ago

    by Idiosyncratic

    sorry, im being evil (and commenting on my own poem numerous times), thank you for reviewing, =)

  • 19 years ago

    by Lushed

    wow. i absolutly fall in love with all of your poems! theyre so wonderful!!
    i love how it's really quite ambigous.. cant wait to continue my stalking you. haha, i like, read all your poems! theyre so good!

  • 19 years ago

    by Felicia Tursi

    I love it so much! Especially the part "an angel without wings"! 5/5 TOTALLY!

  • 19 years ago

    by Erica Brown©

    Very sweet I enjoy your rhyme shceme and how it is written. Well written! Great job keep it up.

  • 19 years ago

    by Kris Lynn

    Awesome. I can describe it as just that. Awesome. Keep it up.

    ~*~Christina~*~