Comments : Of the Talon and the Horn

  • 19 years ago

    by Elizabeth Ann

    One-sided love...desparation seeking history's fables to hold onto them.

    Or a two-side love and another's greater ambitious, or even unaware because they've somehow been deafened tot he other one's cries.

    I found this very thoughtful, interesting how it can go two ways...an even contain both possibility read moe than once.

    Bravo!

  • 19 years ago

    by Elizabeth Ann

    I am so sorry for the typos, I was hasty to press enter before proof reading...

    Corrections are as follows: "two-sided...to the...and even...more than once".

  • 19 years ago

    by erely

    So beautiful,reminds me of how lost I really am...all your poems are wonderful