Comments : What You Leave Behind

  • 14 years ago

    by SCARECROW

    Absolutely beautiful. I agree, your grandmother would be proud. You really know to bring out the emotion. Awesome. *v*

  • thanks guys =] i really need the support...

  • 14 years ago

    by ♥Me™

    great poem 5/5. im sorry about your grandma, I dont know how it feels like, but i will in the up coming years. thanks for commenting on my poems.

    -kaylyn-

  • 14 years ago

    by CynicxSincexBirth

    That was great, I love the way you express yourself, not many can as the way you do, keep it up, I know what its like, I lost my grandpa. But sadly, I had kept myself detatched from him, afraid of the hurt I would face once he was gone, now all i feel is regret, but not loss or miss. How can you miss something you've never had?

  • 14 years ago

    by Britt

    i'm really sorry about your grandpa...great poem!
    *britt*

  • 14 years ago

    by Nici

    I change to the other poems that I read on here. A nice change though.

    Starting with a nursery rhyme gets the mind thinking.

    Keep Writing

    Nici

  • aww great poem girl...keep up the good work

  • 14 years ago

    by Ironic Allure

    Very touching poem.
    I especially liked these lines:
    If I could only pick you from my dreams
    And hug you for real, I always would.

    I'm sure alot of people feel like that, variation of reasons though.
    Take care of yourself
    All my love,
    Laura.