Good poem 5 points all the way check mine out if you can. =)

Hey thats some good stuff. I like it.

Hey Rachel!! this is really good...keep on writing, and take care hun!
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

Wow. I love all your quotes! keep writing hun there all really good! xXx

Excellent poem.....you show emotions well in your words. Keep up the great work!!

I really like this... but with this stanza:

I swim to the center of a lake,
And pray that you'll return here.
But even now I know the answer,
I've got to let you go, thats clear.

I thought it sounded like a bit of a forced rhyme. Asides from that, well done!

xx, PorteR

awww wow i'm speechless...
Love Always,
Angel

Great poem ! Keep up the good work