OMG YOU HAVE A NAME!!!!!!!!!! lmao! Hey andrew! lol -shakes your hand- Im not outta your league with poems, Honestly with a bit of formating and a good dictionary anyone can write like me=)

Now for your poem,
its passionate and I can feel the pain of your heart being ripped out. I can relate totally, -mutters- lol keep it up hun=)

Much Love
Jenn