eeek thankky youuuu ps check mail ;) lol, yeah working on this new poem, love poem, but with a slightly different style.

Another really great poem, Nathan....

I think it could use a little polishing though... the lines seem a little choppy and... I don't know... thrown together... I'm sorry if this seems harsh, it is not meant to be at all...

You have some great ideas in this, and with a little work will be awesome!

I can email you with some suggestions if you like.... (via private message if you have that enabled)