Heart felt, and beautiful. Read mine, called EARTH AWAKES
Take 5*****

Great write hun...this is the first one I read about the Tsunami...I've only slightly heard things about the whole thing o.o...Beautifully writte hun...moving...<3 xxx

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexx

It was so sad the whole thing....but this poem is very good!!

So good but so sad
makes u think how much life means to us when so many ppl lose their lives
plz read mine tsunami disaster and trust in him

I really enjoyed this poem, its very created, and expresses alot of feeling, its very well written, and i personally really like it! but i was wondering if maybe you could comment and or vote on my new poem called "White Silk Dress" if its not too much trouble! Thanks, sarah jenkins!

Very well written, Logan. The words "We cannot control the world" are so true. Within the world we only have control over our own actions.

you tou all for your comments again

this poem is really really good...keep writing,im looking forward to reading more of your poems.