Hey thats awesome, it expresses a lot of emotion and anger. I think it's really good. Maybe because it relates to me and my father but still. Keep up the good work!

Ohmy. Intense emotions displayed here.
Your feelings for your father seem raw and "tasteless".
Cannot say I totally blame you,
reading the meaning of this poem, and all.
You did wonderful with this one,
a true delight to read.
I do hope everything is alright with you?
Good work and keep it up, you have what it takes.
Overall Rating: 5.0/5