Hmmm. This one's difficult. I like the way you've related your message metaphorically but I don't like the fact that you've rhymed in some stanzas and not in others. Personally I think that if you're going to write a poem in a particular style, you should stick to it. Although, sometimes rhyming and sometimes not can be classed as a particular style, I don't think it's very common. Again, could do with a little work. Well done for this though :) Take care.

Not all my comments are about my father leaving us. Only two are . Everything else is about other people . You shouldn't say stuff if you don't know . And don't say sorry if you don't mean it.

I wasn't the one being rude first. Im rude to whoever gives me attitude thank you very much.

You spelled judgmental wrong. There is no "e"

i liked it. couldve had a lil bit more rhyme, but it was a good metaphor for the flowers and judgement. im gonna read some more stuff, good job.