I really enjoyed this poem, its very created, and expresses alot of feeling, its very well written, and i personally really like it! but i was wondering if maybe you could comment and or vote on my new poem called "White Silk Dress" if its not too much trouble! Thanks, sarah jenkins!

hey, this is perty good, and i can tell it came frum the heart, keep it up, and take care!
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

Heartfelt. And that's why it deserves a 5.