Comments : My Goodbye.

  • 19 years ago

    by Sarah

    This poem was very sad. It's well written though, keep up the great work. I give it a well deserved 5/5..stay happy.

    §The Only Rose In This Desert§

  • 19 years ago

    by happy days

    that was really sad but amazingly good at the same time, i agree with sarah definately a 5/5. keep up the good work xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by confusion

    great poem, really liked the lines

    My heart would always ache for him
    And he was nowhere to be found
    I reached out to hold him
    Yet nothing but air was around

    fantastically written.

    stay strong and take care, lu -x-x-x-