Very good poem, i enjoyed it, nothing fancy about it..so that you have to sit and think about every line for ten minutes before you get it.

I think your going to be a very well set poet if you keep with it. I am going to add you to my favorites, i look forward to your newer peices.

Hi, great poem.
I know how you feel my dad died when I was 12, that's four years ago and I still miss him so much..

*I gave you a 5*
Hugs from September,
Please check out my poems.

I like this poem it was short and beautiful just how i like it lol. your words was nicely put and it flowed perfectly. And again nice job on this poem