IT GREAT
NICE ONE AND SIMPLE

This was a really good poem keep it up.
try to wright some more

Hey, Jabu!

Pretty and simple, but the emotion is there. I especially like the lines "i thought heaven is up there,but since meeting you,i believe it is down here." I know that feeling! Good work- and write more! You are articulate enough to put your thoughts and emotions to good work in poetry.

Cheers
Mercedes

A beutiful poem. there is alot of emotion there. you seem to have expressed yourself very clearly

Ruby

Great poem,
i love if you wrote some more.
i'd defo go out of my way to read it

Wow jabu i love it so sweet and very comforting ! keep up the great work

love
gabby
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Poetry is a platform where one expresses his/her emotions.Is a beautiful feeling, difficult to speak,but easy to put on paper.

Very nice jabu good to see a fellow south african here
keep it up