dont get me wrong i loved it i just didnt really see how first two paragraphs fit in wif da rest . it is gr8 tho k , dont h8 me , im just wondering , luv lidxxXxx

very nice poem, I really liked it .. Keep it Up !!

great job. i thought it was really good.
keep up the good work

That was really good!! I like it a whole lot. Good job!
Rachelx

i like this

This is mi favorite of ur poems so far. i LOVE this poem.