I've always loved the dark side of fantasy books, and stuff like that, but this poem supasses them all. For a moment i truly believed i was there. your imagery is astounding.

This sequel to your beloved first is a sensation! The "Mystic" you uphold and even escalate in this next phase compells me to beg a third.

Excellent writing, fantastic imagery, and overall absolutely beautiful.

Thank you very much! High praise from such wonderful poetesses! :)

And there will be a third... we'll (including myself) just have to see what emerges. I wasn't expecting this second one to come so quickly, so I don't know if inspiration will come quickly or if something completely different will manifest the tale. But however it rises, it will be from Her point of view....

awesome, i love your writing technique, truly an excellent write...

Absolutely amazing...you have amazing talent. Keep writing, please!!!
Gurdy x (GoddessOfWings)

As the first, intriguing and keeps the story going with a profound poetic narration taking place between characters, which I admire. i like that you were able to use some of the same symbols as in part one and then turn them around to fit for a new scene. The imagery you set is beautiful and implied danger keeps the reader entranced and wanting more. Some lines I admired,
"But your wits are uncanny, your form full of grace,
You speed from harms way with preternatural pace.
Alas! without thought you flee toward the tower,
To your childhood home and your guardian dour."
Well done. look forward to part III