This is a GREAT poem. It really is. It flows well and the rhyming scheme is good.
I especially love the line:
"Drifted thoughts as I sleep awake"
It's amazing.
Keep up the good work,
xoxZoexox

it sounds like me......but i love it..wonderful job

wow this is really amazing! i love it! it's really creative and the story stays in my head! i can't stop reading it! keep it up!

Love, Taylor

ooo wow!! awesome! keep it up

Hey lauren awsome peom I loved it...keep it up

great poem, i read some of your other stuff as well, your a good writer, keep it up!!