great writing keep it up

It is more like a quote. But it is very good.
Check me out
~~(~~Morana~~)~~

I agree with it being mroe of a quote though it was probably too long to post as once hence the reason its a poem I enjoyed this piece loosing grip, I found it chilling and haunting yet subtle...great work FIVE :o)
Thanks for your kind comment also
Eirisa

wow!
ive read ur work..
and this puts u into my favs!
uve got serious talent!

dat was straight up. i liked it 5/5
can u comment & vote on my poem y do boys lie
thankz
xx hayz xx

I really liked it, but I'd have to agree with a few of the other people. That's more of a quote. But its a good one. >3jess