I am sorry its not very good but this is kind of what happened to me my friend killed her self and I was there so I wrote about it and changed it so that I do asell.

Hey this poem i sreally really said but i like it but ima go so check me out-love always Shanna Irene-

hey its gr8 , i like how u put u as killing ya self as well makes it dramatic , i fink a lot of emotion went into dis , gee do i sound bit like a teacher !!! ny way im given ya 5 coz u deserve it hon , luv lidxxXxx