This was really good. Nice wording and everything. Keep it up!

hey nice poem !!! loved it, but I guess some guys can be true...lol ! Take care,
E.

nice poem really nice your right lots of guys are pretend but i find so are women sometimes to but wicked good poem

good poem....just dont doubt all guyz cuz of one stupid ass
luv ya

very good and very true

Hey
I love your poem..you know how to write what you feel
Good job

If you get some time do you think you could read my poem "I Miss you" it would mean alot..its not very good but i want to know what you think

Aw hun this is awesome, I loved it, I can definetly relate to this and I do agree boys are definetly pretend sometimes, this is awesome, take care

Hey heather........thanx a lot for commenting about my poem.....
this is truly a wonderful poem.and i like your last line...MOSTLY all boys are pretend...thats is true...cos not all are...
one suggestion tho....u could try breaking up each line into two....i mean after the commas....it would make it much easier to read.....so just space it out k?
love yas mvah GOD SPEED;)!