Comments : Abused.

  • 19 years ago

    by *tears*

    That was a really good poem. Take care.
    ~Ashley~ 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by lisa marie

    hmm violet shut up about the sad poems? i never said for people too. i just said most people aren't depressed. i can make sad poems i if i want too, you don't have to read them. Most of those sad poems aren't really even about me or how i feel. i just have an imagination and tend to use it.

  • 19 years ago

    by Fighter (Ariane L.)

    loved it! excellent work! i looooove the last paragraph... amazing!
    Fighter
    -xXx-

  • 19 years ago

    by Kalika

    wow that was a very touching poem, and it was very creative aswell, however it was very sad....it' especially sad how often something like that happens.....

    Kalika

  • 19 years ago

    by xRachelx

    Thats really sad, It bought a tear to my eye! Its still totally awesome though. Your writing style is so good! Im getting jealous now! :P Im definately adding you to my favourites.
    Take care,
    Rachelxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Red Charm

    Wow this is so sad. the last verse was amazing!!!!!!!!! Totally amazing. i loved this it's so touching.

  • 19 years ago

    by Shadows Collide

    nice poem, like the use of other rhymes to reiterate yours

  • 19 years ago

    by Carmen

    OMG, that's so sad! you are now probably my favorite author on this site. please continue writing, i love reading stuff from you! keep it up! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Kel*bel

    omg you are such an amoazing writer...this has touched me deeply...the ending is very good i hope this isnt true it is so sad..well keep up the good work.. i love all your poems there great!! c ya

  • 18 years ago

    by Amythyst

    Man, Your Writing shit is the best, I loved it 5/5 I LOVED the nursery rhyme. Great Stuff.
    -I'm Nobody & A Nimrod

  • 18 years ago

    by justin

    That hit deeper than expected. So many people think I have no emotions and feel nothing when in reality I just cover it up. I feel more than most people but I've had to keep it covered up.