Now THAT was exactly how it was for me. Awesome job!

Hahah I absolutly loveee the ending!

Thats so funnyyy.! =]
the only thing that i can think of as 'critizism' would be, in the last stanza the rythem was abit off, becaues you have three lines the run together abit.

other than that great job!

Steph

I really love this poem