I think it's so unique and clever of you to be writing this beautiful story through a set of poems! You did a lovely job with the descriptions and your technique portraying her emotions was also done well. I got so excited at this stance,
"We got back on the road
Neither of us said anything at all
Jonathan was a good guy
And I was starting to fall.. "
I didn't know she actually fell in love with him, I'm so excited to see what happens next!
Well done (again)