I like the verse about how "I lied" sounded like "I never tried". Ya did a very good job on it.

It's go0d. I can relate so well done!
Take care always,

;;^^Kalah

RIGENA!!!!!! hii...lol...tht was a very good poem i gave u a 5! even tho it made me all sad and teary and made me lookii like an anime character where my eyes get big teary and sparkly and i look rly innocent...u knoe the face i do wen i want sumthing and u won't agree and then u do..hehe...but either way i rly like it even tho it makes me feel like shit...and makes feel like writing a huge huge huge huge huge huge gigantic card tht says "IM SORRY" bai bai oh and you don't feel like tht anymore right? right?! RIGHT?!?!?!! cuz if u do i swear i'll go to my corner and start crying like a 4 year old who's lollipop fell...i will...don't doubt me...anyways ttyl...<3 ya cya tomo
~Christina<----pssssst...i'm the big meanie she was talking baout...but i hate myself for it and you're allowed to hate me too...but read my poems hehe

oh yea....rigena go read my poems i wrote sum new ones...luv ya!! ^_^

great poem. im sorry about your loss, i hate it when my friends lie to me too.

I *heart* SOS!!

I was looking through your poems and decided to read an older one. This one is really good! I gave it a 5.

~jAmIe~