Try giving it a new ending, that one is way too common.

good!!!

it's alright, it doesn't have to be longer, cuz it's only a funny poem, but try somethin' original

GOOODDD:D

very funny! but i have read this many times before... but it's good that you admit to not writing this. unlike others who steal poems and say they did write it.-_-smiles!-_- great job!!!