Comments : Unnoticed

  • 19 years ago

    by Oliver Stevenson

    amazing, purely amazing! dont give up un xxx i love you! dont give up now, you have come so far xxxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Toni

    Thanku hun xxxxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by deadnalone

    that is bl00dy f u c k in amazing. it is definetly one of THE BEST poems i have EVER read. i loved it. it was amazing. great metaphors and just f u c k in hell dat was awesome. i aint lying.
    take care hun,
    u no im here to talk to if u need it *hugs*,
    i luvd it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    ellie
    x x x x x x x x x :D

  • 19 years ago

    by Toni

    Thanku ellie !xx

  • 19 years ago

    by Toni

    Thanku! xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by confusion

    wow, that was incredible, deserves mor than a 5. fantastic!!!!! ma fave verse was

    And like a cloud, she floats unnoticed
    Even though her tears are falling
    She can’t help but to stare at the sky
    She knows that death is calling

    everyline displayd a perfect picture. hope you are ok, keep holding on an keep it up!! lu -x-x-x-

  • 19 years ago

    by Toni

    Thanku hun! xxx