hey very nicely done.
it remembers me of the time when i was with my gf and i dont know why i stopped myself from doing it.
i really regreted it later on coz i came 2 know my gf wanted me 2 make a 1st more and after that day she went away fro 2 months. so i can feel ur pain.
anyways the poem is very well written i give 5 of 5 for it.
do check my poems too